This is great, Esin. Your house style is really clear and you have edited your images effectively.
Your main focus in your editing should be your text: is it accurate? Check for gaps, missing words. Make sure your text is not too close to your central graphic, and consider the layout of your questions (could your answer to the first question fit in one column?). Is the tone of the text appropriate to your target audience? Consider the type of language used in similar magazines.
To challenge yourself further, compare this with other double page spreads. Would anything make this even better?
This is great, Esin. Your house style is really clear and you have edited your images effectively.
ReplyDeleteYour main focus in your editing should be your text: is it accurate? Check for gaps, missing words. Make sure your text is not too close to your central graphic, and consider the layout of your questions (could your answer to the first question fit in one column?). Is the tone of the text appropriate to your target audience? Consider the type of language used in similar magazines.
To challenge yourself further, compare this with other double page spreads. Would anything make this even better?
An excellent draft, Esin - keep going!